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英语说练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 7, 课程 5

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The Statue of Liberty is a landmark in New York. The French people gave it to the American people as a gift in the year 1886. The Statue of Liberty is a monument for remembering friendship between the two countries. The Statue of Liberty shows a woman standing. She is holding a torch in one hand, and a book in the other hand. Artists made the statue from copper. The statue is 46.5 meters tall.

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  • dpike
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    Very good reading.  However you could improve it by saying the final 't' sound in words more clearly and by speaking ore slowly.  Words like 'Liberty' and 'Artists' need a final 't' sound.  Listen to my recording.
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  • sphynx
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    Thank you dpike for pointing out my mistakes. I think I spoke a little bit too fast which made those words especially "liberty" and "artists" sounded unclear, in this case losing the "t" sound. Your recording does indeed helped me. :)

    Here's my revision. :)
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