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中文普通话书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 2

人の特徴を説明する

说明: 描写6个不同的人:一个女人,一个男人,一个男孩,一个女孩,你和我。用上积极和消极的描述性词汇。 xiàwǔ hǎo , wǒde míngzi shì…。wǒ láizì…。 wǒ shì yī míng (xuésheng/lǎoshī ) 。 wǒ ( hǎo/bùzěnme hǎo/hěnhǎo ) 。 zhù nǐ yǒu měihǎo de yītiān

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zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao.
ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!
ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang
zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong
wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai
ni bu fu you, ni qiong


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  • Joyce Xuan
    Mochapoints: 4645  |  教师分: 1588

    zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da

             this comma is extra~

     Good job!

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  • Eliza
    Mochapoints: 4321  |  教师分: 482 (0%)

    zhe ge nuv ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge nuv ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren gao,ta gao. ta shi nan ren ai ,ta ai! ta bu shi nan hai ,ta shou, ta shi pang. zhe ge nuv hai bu fu you, zhe ge nuv hai qiong .wo bu shi nuv hai,wo gao. wo shi nuv hai,wo ai. ni bu fu you, ni qiong .

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  • windy
    Mochapoints: 3676  |  教师分: 366 (0%)

    zhe ge nu(nv) ren, (remove the mark) de nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu(nv) ren de nian ji xiao. ta bu shi (mei you)nan ren gao, ta shi (bi)nan ren ai! ta bu shi (mei you)nan hai shou, ta shi (hen)pang .zhe ge nu(nv) hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong .wo bu shi (mei you)nu hai gao, wo shi (bi)nu hai ai. ni bu fu you, ni qiong .

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  • tracy
    Mochapoints: 9246  |  教师分: 201 (0%)

    zhe ge nv ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge nv ren nian ji xiao; ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai! (ta ge zi bu gao,ta de ge zi hen ai) , zhe ge nan hai bu shou, ta hen pang; zhe ge nv hai bu fu you, ta hen qiong, wo shi nv hai. wo ge zi bu gao; ni bu fu you, ni hen qiong.    

    good

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  • windy
    Mochapoints: 3676  |  教师分: 366 (0%)

    ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!

    what do you want to say?

    Do you want to say that woman is shorter than man? yes or no?

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  • Only You
    Mochapoints: 3766  |  教师分: 2176 (0%)

    zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai! ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai ni bu fu you, ni qiong

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  • carol~~
    Mochapoints: 1416  |  教师分: 135 (0%)

    zhe ge nv ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nv ren nian ji xiao. ta mei you nan ren gao, ta bi nan ren ai! ta mei you nan hai shou, ta  pang. zhe ge nv hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong. wo mei you nu hai gao, wo bi nu hai ai. ni bu fu you, ni qiong

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  • Denny
    Mochapoints: 1753  |  教师分: 144 (0%)

    Ta bu bi nan ren gao,ta bi nan ren ai.……,you should change the "shi" to "bi"

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  • nicky
    Mochapoints: 612  |  教师分: 148 (0%)

    honestly i don't understand some sentence

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  • vivi
    Mochapoints: 6064  |  教师分: 103 (0%)

    zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren gao,(ta shi nan hai,ta bu gao) ta shi nan ren ai! ta bu shi nan hai shou,(ta shi nan hai,ta bu shou) ta shi pang (ta hen pang)zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi nu hai gao, (wo shi nu hai,wo bu gao)wo shi nu hai ai ni bu fu you, ni qiong

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  • Platona
    Mochapoints: 138  |  教师分: 26 (0%)

    miao shu de hai bu cuo <very  good>!

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  • rute -lin
    Mochapoints: 255  |  教师分: 138 (0%)

    good job! not nu,nv 女,maybe you can say:ta mei you nan ren gao~

    good job !加油!!

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  • Jessie
    Mochapoints: 4843  |  教师分: 1736 (0%)

    zhe ge nu ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren (nan ren =man)(gao =tall), ta shi nan ren (ai=short)! ta bu shi nan hai (nan hai =boy)(shou =thin), ta shi pang(ta hen pang) zhe ge nu hai bu fu you(zhe ge nv ren ai ta bu fu you), zhe ge nu hai qiong ,wo bu shi nu hai (nv hai =girl), wo shi nu hai . ni bu fu you, ni qiong

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  • Nanan
    Mochapoints: 8389  |  教师分: 1666 (100%)

    ta bu shi ge gao nan ren ,ta shi ge ai nan ren .

    ta bu shi ge shou nan hai ,ta shi ge pang nan hai .

    wo bu shi gao yi ge gao nv hai ,wo shi ge ai nv hai .

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  • Nanan
    Mochapoints: 8389  |  教师分: 1666 (100%)

    You have done a good job .

    But I think you'd better try to tye the Chinese character , and this maybe help for your study .

     

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  • Tammy
    Mochapoints: 476  |  教师分:(0%)

    Well down. but there are something you must pay attention to.  The adjective should put before noun.

    zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. zhe ge nan ren bu gao, zhe ge nan ren  ai! zhe ge nan hai bu shou, ta shi pang zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi gao nu hai gao, wo shi ai nu hai ai ni bu fu you, ni qiong

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  • Pollyanna
    Mochapoints: 1077  |  教师分: 221 (0%)

    zhe genuren nian ji bu da, zhe genuren nian ji xiao.( ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!) ta mei you nan ren gao,ta bi nan ren ai! (ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang)ta bu shi hen shou,ta pang. (zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong)zhe ge nü hai bu fu you,zhe ge nü hai hen qiong. (wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai

    )wo mei you nü hai gao, wo binü hai ai. (ni bu fu you, ni qiong) ye bu fu you, ye qiong.

    You Write quite well:) just pay some attention to Chinese exepression. Go on! 

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  • Chelsea Chen
    Mochapoints: 2132  |  教师分: 36 (0%)

    nv ren ,not nu ren,nice job

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  • 蒲静春Jingchun,pu
    Mochapoints: 2055  |  教师分: 69 (0%)

    ta bu bi nanren gao,ta bi nan ren ai. shi huancheng bi.

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  • Tracy
    Mochapoints: 7619  |  教师分: 68 (0%)

    ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!  

    zhe ge nan ren bu gao, ta ai !

      这   个   男   人   不   高,他  矮 ! 

    ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang

    zhe ge nan hai bu shou, ta pang.

     这   个    男   孩  不    瘦,  他   胖。

    wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai

    wo shi ge nv hai wo bu gao,wo ai

     我   是  个  女  孩   我  不   高, 我 矮

     

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  • shell
    Mochapoints: 1594  |  教师分: 258 (0%)

    good! &lsquo;ta bu shi nan ren gao&rsquo;  ying gai shi :ta bu shi nan ren ,ta ge zi hen gao.

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  • emily0119
    Mochapoints: 704  |  教师分: 123 (0%)
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  • zj
    Mochapoints: 1414  |  教师分: 57 (0%)

    ta shi nan ren ,ta gao!ta bu shi nan hai ,ta shou!

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  • Elisa
    Mochapoints: 1519  |  教师分: 240

    zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi mei you nan ren gao, ta shi bi na ge nan ren ai! ta bu shi mei you nan hai shou, ta shi   hen pang .zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi  mei you na ge nu hai gao, wo bi na ge nu hai ai .ni bu fu you, ni qiong

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  • 蓝郁
    Mochapoints: 1923  |  教师分: 136 (0%)

    You did very well,but there are also some mistakes in your content.such as "nv ren","bu bi " ........come on !in my view,chinse is more difficult than others.

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