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中文普通话书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 2

人の特徴を説明する

说明： 描写6个不同的人：一个女人，一个男人，一个男孩，一个女孩，你和我。用上积极和消极的描述性词汇。 xiàwǔ hǎo ， wǒde míngzi shì…。wǒ láizì…。 wǒ shì yī míng （xuésheng/lǎoshī ） 。 wǒ （ hǎo/bùzěnme hǎo/hěnhǎo ） 。 zhù nǐ yǒu měihǎo de yītiān

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People on this site often ask for my views on love and relationships. I like monogamy, so once I'm in a relationship, there can be no other women in my life. Before that point, though, I must be selective and careful. I have been hurt by a break-up before and don't intend to put myself in that sort of situation again.

I value trust, love, honesty, commitment...all those things that characterize a traditional Asian relationship. Many non-Americans stereotype American relationships as universally unstable and acrimonious, but I think that is a mischaracterization. In any event, I don't represent the typical American at all.

I am especially attracted to Asian (especially Chinese) women. Part of this is (I think) innate, and part is logical. My physical attraction is probably natural and unavoidable. But I also admire the typical Asian work ethic, intelligence, monogamy, etc. I'm not afraid to admit that one benefit of coming to this site is to meet Chinese girls.
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  • aniion
    Mochapoints: 432  |  教师分: 74 (0%)
    sorry,My english is really poor.
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  • tomspost
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    very good
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  • 外国人
    Mochapoints: 319  |  教师分: 35 (0%)
    I hope it's really good--I'm an American!
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  • 阿八
    Mochapoints: 1801  |  教师分: 564 (0%)
    pretty good! maybe god wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one so that when we finally meet the right person, we will know how to be grateful for that gift. good luck
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  • Susan
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  • Susan
    Mochapoints: 1431  |  教师分: 309 (0%)
    It's wonderful.
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  • Lilly
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  • Lilly
    Mochapoints: 339  |  教师分: 184 (0%)
    Very good! Just now I emailed you my comment on Livemocha. Please check!
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  • sak
    Mochapoints: 134  |  教师分: 34 (0%)
    how about Vietnamese girls? Do you have any vision of them?thanks for accepting my add request
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  • sak
    Mochapoints: 134  |  教师分: 34 (0%)
    how about Vietnamese girls? Do you have any vision of them?thanks for accepting my add request
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  • Avril
    Mochapoints: 402  |  教师分: 70 (0%)
    I hope u can be happy forever.
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  • shirley
    Mochapoints: 434  |  教师分: 38 (0%)
    good luck here,i hope you are not daunt by hurt
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  • Elise
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  • Andy_xiaodu
    Mochapoints: 3067  |  教师分: 1338 (0%)
    It is so funny for your paragraph, and I believe that you are not typical American. I am very happy that you like Chinese traditional culture and ethic. So I have noting to do but keep my fingers crossed for you. Good luck. I have a sugesstions for you why don't you live in Chinese. Indeed, there are so many chances for you.
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  • 玥玓瓅
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    If you are learing Chinese you should express yourself in Chinese.
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  • Mr.Nee
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    In chinese, It will be good!
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  • baby jimmy
    Mochapoints: 1371  |  教师分: 562 (0%)
    SORRY I DON NOT HAVE A GOOD ENGLISH
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  • V {独孤求败}
    Mochapoints: 127923  |  教师分: 127479 (90%)

    好
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    获得 Flash string(11) "transparent"
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