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中文普通话书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 4, 课程 3

描述天气

说明： 描述五天的天气，解释人们在这样的天气需要什么。例如：今天下雨，很冷。 那个女人需要雨衣和雨伞。

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Xian zai shi yi dian zhong. Zhe ge tai dian shi zai yi zi shang. zhe ge bi ji ben bian niao xiao bi jiao qing

It is 11 oclock. There is a computer on the table.It is a notoebook and is quite light.
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  • 会唱歌的土豆
    Mochapoints: 31  |  教师分: 10 (0%)
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  • 会唱歌的土豆
    Mochapoints: 31  |  教师分: 10 (0%)
    computer=dian nao; table=zhuo zi; xian zai shi yi dian zhong.zhe tai dian nao zai yi zi shang.zhe ge bi ji ben fei chang qing. 现 在 是 一 点 钟。这 台 电 脑 在 椅 子 上。这 个 笔 记 本 非 常 轻。 question:notoebook = notebook?
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  教师分: 103536
    xiànzài shì shíyī diǎn zhōng 现在 是 十一 点 钟 。 zhè tái diànnǎo zài zhuōzi shàng 这 台 电脑 在 桌子 上 ， zhègè bǐjì běn hěn xiǎo 这个 笔记 本 很 小 ， bǐjiào qīng 比较 轻 。
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  教师分: 103536
    Great job!!! Congratulations! Your writing is concise, fluent, beautiful, and comprehensible. I just made a minor change. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you! 非常好! 您能用拼音清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内和课外的知识，创造中文句子。您的句子简明, 流利，是可理解的。 我为您做了一点修改。非常感谢您。继续努力！我为您祝福！
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  • 281124979
    Mochapoints: 137  |  教师分: 10 (0%)
    It is 11 oclock. There is a computer on the table.It is a notoebook and is quite light. 现在是11点钟，电脑放在桌子上，这是台笔记本，它很轻
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  • happybean
    Mochapoints: 229  |  教师分: 5 (0%)
    现在是十一点钟。桌子上放着一台电脑。它是一台笔记本电脑所以很轻。 xian zai shi shi yi dian zhong. zhuo zi shang fang zhe yi tai dian nao. ta shi yi tai bi ji ben suo yi hen qing.
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  • youngjia
    Mochapoints: 5651  |  教师分: 39 (0%)
    Do you mean laptop or sth else? pay attention to vocabularies below: computer = dian nao 电脑 chair = yi zi 椅子 table = zhuo zi 桌子 you may say: 桌上有一台电脑，是笔记本的，所以很轻。（zhuo shang you yi tai diannao, shi bi ji ben de, suoyi hen qing.）
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  • tea
    Mochapoints: 26  |  教师分: 25 (0%)
    zhe tai dian nao shi zai yi zi shang .zhe ge bi ji ben dian nao bi jiao qing there are some mistakes
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  • Joanne
    Mochapoints: 3644  |  教师分: 70 (0%)
    computer is "dian nao",you said"tai dian shi"i think you want to say "da dian shi"it means big tv.i think your chinese is very good though.
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  • liuyezi
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  • liuyezi
    Mochapoints: 302  |  教师分: 50 (0%)
    It seems that "Zhe ge tai dian shi zai yi zi shang"means "there is a TV on the chair". This can be fine:Zhe you tai dian nao zai zhuo zi shang. What's more ,"computer"is "dian nao". But as a whole, it's very good.
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  • Shen
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    xian zai shi shi yi dian zhong. zhuo zi shang you yi tai dian nao. ta shi yi tai bi ji ben dian nao, hen qing.
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  • Isabella
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    In Chiese, we use two kinds of word together to tell others the amount of things. We call them "数词(shuci)" and "量词(liangci)". Like the way you descripe something uncountable, you say "a glass of water" when you are not really wanting to call for attention to the "glass". It is used to tell others how much you have. In Chinese, we give it the name "量词(liangci)"， and "a" is called "数词(shuci)". These kind of words are together used to depict both countable and uncountable nouns, not only for uncountable nouns. 就像你们英语中说“一杯水”一样，你并不是想告诉人家你有一个杯子，而是想告诉别人你有多少水。这里，“杯”就被我们叫做“量词”，而“一”则被叫做数词。在英语中，这种搭配只用来修饰不可数名词，而在中文里则是所有的名次都用它们来修饰. However, we can only one of each kinds of words to describe one thing. So you can't use "ge" and "tai" at the same time, because they are both belong to "liangci".
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  • V {独孤求败}
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    好!
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