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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 5

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I am living in Kuala Lumpur, capital city of Malaysia. this city is small, because it only 1.5 million people are living in the city. there is many buildings are in KL, that most of them are hotels. If you use google map, you can not see the city very easily, because Malaysia is hidden into the jungles. Rain is coming most of the times. landscape is so nice. The mountains are full of threes.
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  • Hawthorn
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  • Hawthorn
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    Quite good. Remember to use capital letters at the start of all your sentences. "This city is small, because there are only 1.5 million people living in the city. There are many buildings in KL, most of them are hotels." "...because Malaysia is hidden in the jungle" or "... because much of Malaysia is hidden under the jungle". "It rains most of the time. The landscape is so nice. The mountains are full of trees." or "There are lots of trees on the mountains.". :)
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  • megpt
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    I live in Kuala Lumpur. Use the present simple - ( for regular, habitual actions). The present continuous is for something which is happening now, e.g. I am leaving you a comment.
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