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My brother is young , and his father is old but my mother is very pretty and funny , my wife is tall and thin, my brother in law is short and ugly too.
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- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
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My brother is young. His father is old. My mother is very pretty and funny. My wife is tall and thin. My brother in law is short and ugly too.
You did a good job but your sentences were too long. Only use the word "but" when you are going to say something opposite after the "but". I guess you do not like your brother in law.
My brother is young, his father is old, my mother is very pretting and funny, my wife is tall and thin, but my brother in law is short and ugly.
mucho but/and not necessary
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