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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 2

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I like to go for electronic shopping center. I need information about new technology and computer. Internet and computer is inseparably of my life and can not live without them. Since I woke up in morning, I am connected to the internet until after midnight. How about you? which kind if shopping center you like to go?
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  • megpt
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  • megpt
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    I like to go *to the* electronic*s* shopping center (or centre, if you're English). I need information about new technology and computer*s*. *The* Internet and computer*s are an essential part* of my life and *I* can not live without them. I am connected to the internet *from when* I *wAke* up in morning until after midnight. How about you? Which kind Of shopping center you like to go *to*?
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  • dolphin582
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    I like to go shopping AT electronic shopping centre. I need information about new technology and computers. Internet and Computers ARE AN inseperable PART of my life and I cannot live without then. Since I wake up in the morning I am connected to the internet until after midnight. How about you? WHAT kind of shopping centre DO you like to go TO? very good ALI only 7 mistakes today
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  • Kate
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    Very good! "I like to go TO THE electronic shopping center. I need information about new technology and COMPUTERS, AS THE Internet and computers ARE AN IMPORTANT PART of my life and I COULD not live without them. Since I WAKE up in the morning, I am connected to the Internet until after midnight. How about you? Which kind OF shopping DO you like to go to?
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  • Ali
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    thanks for encourage me.
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