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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 8, 课程 4

形容你所在城市的某个地区

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I have black hair. My hair is long. My husband thinks that my hair is more beaultiful when it is long than it is short. My eyes are light brown. I dont have any facial hair.
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  • carl
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    excellent, i would add one word:

    I have black hair. My hair is long. My husband thinks that my hair is more beaultiful when it is long rather than it is short. My eyes are light brown. I dont have any facial hair.

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  • Julio Rodriguez
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    My husband thinks that my hair is more beaultiful when it is long than when it is short.

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  • saheed
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    whaoo that is a nice one

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  • IBRAHIM
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    Very good

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  • mishaikh
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    I have long black hair. My husbands thinks that I am more beautiful in long hair than in short hair. Actually it is the love we have for each other, that makes look attractive to whom we love. My eyes are light brown. 

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  • dirant
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    I have long black hair. My husband prefers my hair long than short. My eyes are light brown. I dont have any facial hair.

    Thank God, you don't have any facial hair. Certainly your husband wouldn't like to see you with a beard.

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  • carnivalman
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    .......than when it is short.

    don't

    Boa sorte.

    Carnivalman

     

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