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描述一下你上一次购物的情形。你买了什么？花了多少钱？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 4
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The last time when I went shopping, It was the last month, to buy a laptop. It didn't cost me too dear because it was in promotion. I waited long time to offer it to me, because I had not enough money. Now I am glad, it works very well, and with it, I can share many differents things with my friends, as pictures, video and so on.
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如何给予好评的小贴士:
具体
- 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
- 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
- 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
- 检查了你的口语练习
- 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。
The last time when I went shopping, It was the last month to buy a laptop. It didn't cost me too dear much because it was in a promotion. I waited a long time to offer buy it to me, because I had not did not have enough money. Now I am glad. It works very well, and with it, I can share many differents things with my friends, such as pictures, videos and so on. This is well written and the grammar mistakes are small ones. Good work