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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 8, 课程 3

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In 2002 I got married and became the head of my family.
Now there are 4 people in my family. They are my wife, my daughter, my son and me.
My wife is the same age as mine, so sometimes I grumble in her presence that I'm living with an aunt.
My daughter is 5 years old and the younger is a 10 month old baby.
Before I got married, my family was consist of my parents, my younger sister and me.
My parents come to my house everyday to see their lovely grandson and granddaughter.
But my younger sister couldn't because she has been living in Germany since 1999.
She is planning to come to Korea this summer -even though she will stay home just for short period-, and now we are looking forward to meet her again.
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  • ladan
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    Dear YongHyun Great! pls accept my congratulation for having a sweet family :) I have to come these ideas: 1- Now there are 4 people in my family. There are my wife, my daughter, my son and me. 2- My wife is the same age as me. 3- my younger sister can't because she has been living in Germany since 1999. 4- My daughter is 5 years old and my younger kid is a 10 month old baby OR: My daughter is 5 years old and my younger kid is only 10 months old. pls kiss Leonwoo on my behalf :) she is my sweetie little friend.
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  • Sallu2186
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    very good.
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  • Loren Bergeson
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  • Loren Bergeson
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    Good! I had no trouble understanding what you wrote (except for the comment about the aunt). Corrected text and comments below: In 2002 I got married and became the head of my family. Now there are 4 people in my family. They are my wife, my daughter, my son and me. My wife is the same age as *me*, so sometimes I grumble in her presence that I'm living with an aunt. [I don't get this -- an aunt is usually older] My daughter is 5 years old and the younger *child* is a 10 month old baby. Before I got married, my family *consisted* of my parents, my younger sister and me. My parents come to my house everyday to see their lovely grandson and granddaughter. But my younger sister *can't* because she has been living in Germany since 1999. She is planning to come to Korea this summer -even though she will stay home just for *a* short period, and we are looking forward to *meeting* her again.
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  • rainbow
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    Hi Richard, how ever...what can i say...only hello.....good luck!!!
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  • Chinese&Turkish...
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    Well~~~ ^.^
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  • sarnai
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    Great job. You have a wonderful family. Good lucky.
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  • camille
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    In 2002 I got married and became the head of my family. Now there are 4 people in my family. There are my wife, my daughter, my son and me. My wife is the same age as mine me, so sometimes I grumble in her presence that I'm living with an aunt. My daughter is 5 years old and my younger son is a 10 month old baby. Before I got married, my family was consisted of my parents, my younger sister and me. My parents come to my house everyday to see their lovely grandson and granddaughter. But my younger sister couldn't can't because she has been living in Germany since 1999. She is planning to come to Korea this summer -even though she will stay at home just for a short period-, and now we are looking forward to meeting her again.

    Very good.

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