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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 5

描述你的家

说明: 运用本课词汇,向客人解释如何从最近的公车站走到你们家。他应该往哪个方向走?哪里该拐弯?去往你家的路上会看到什么?如何分辩你家房子?

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Hi
So here we go_0
Today´s weather & date:-)

Today´s january 30th from 2008
Heredia Costa Rica
alvaro gonzalez moreno
It´s a bit hot in here. It´s not raining.
To-morrow the wheather should be or could be quite & radically different than today´s wheather due to the *global warming.*↓↓

May grace be with you
http://www.srac.de/ ← ↑
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  • sheila
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    In English you would say Today is January 30th, 2008 . Weather is spelled without the "h" when referring to heat (whether means if - you would you it as whether it happens or not) You could say - Tomorrow the weather should or could be quite radically different than today due to global warming
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  • sheila
    Mochapoints: 123  |  教师分: 75 (0%)
    In English you would say Today is January 30th, 2008 . Weather is spelled without the "h" when referring to heat (whether means if - you would you it as whether it happens or not) You could say - Tomorrow the weather should or could be quite radically different than today due to global warming
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  • sheila
    Mochapoints: 123  |  教师分: 75 (0%)
    In English you would say Today is January 30th, 2008 . Weather is spelled without the "h" when referring to heat (whether means if - you would you it as whether it happens or not) You could say - Tomorrow the weather should or could be quite radically different than today due to global warming
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  • alvaro
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    Ok Many thanks Sheila
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  • Margo
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  • Margo
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    Todays's date is 30th January 2008 the weather today is hot, but is not raining.
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