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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 6, 课程 2

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When I had a birthday , I received a cell phone of my best friend, I would not have given him any presents until your birthday.
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  • lavoisier.bruno
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    good job!!

    God bless you !

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  • Murilo Santos
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    You say from my best friend.

    and

    until HIS birthday

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  • stefano88
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    When I had a birthday , I received a cell phone from my best friend, I would not give him any presents until his birthday.

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  • Lucho
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    ¡Óptimo, Lis!

    I agree with the comments from Murilo and Stefano88, but one more thing:

    ... any present until his birthday.

    Congratulations,

    Luiz

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  • jacksparrow
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    When I had a birthday,I received a cell phone from my best friend

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