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描述一下你在咖啡厅里点了什么。什么是你quick喜爱的饮料？你点了三明治或者甜点吗？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 2
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When I go to the park, I like to see the children running from one side to another, I enjoy to see the faces of the mothers looking at the son or daughter like if he or she is doing somethind very veru important. It makes me remember when I visited the park with my little daughter and .....some times one is ridiculous: one believe that only my daughter does that important thing like to smile while is running and looking back in place of looking at the front.
Now, I do not use isit parks..I am afraid of it and alone is dangerous.
Now, I do not use isit parks..I am afraid of it and alone is dangerous.
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DiegoMochapoints: 543 | 教师分: 85 (0%)一年多前提交的拼字: -
DiegoMochapoints: 543 | 教师分: 85 (0%)
I have to do the exercise but I will not tell the TRUTH. I NEVER visit the park I do not play any SPORTS I only use to ride on bicycle and I don't need the park HERE (hear es como oir) in Venezuela, parks are not a secure place. Only if you live in a private "Condominio" or place, you would enjoy a good park. Aquí en los Estados Unidos hay muchos parques que no están seguros tambíen. Que lástima. Very well written. Diego For reading I prefer my bed, or a place near a table or an armchair but at home....I dont like to be interrupted when I am reading 一年多前提交的
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