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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 1

形容你的衣服

说明: 运用本课词汇形容你正在穿的衣服。它用的是什么材料?你通常穿什么去上班?去参加活动或派对时你会穿什么?你最喜欢的套装是哪件?

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For tourist I recomend the mall shops, nigth clubs, sport clubs, Monserrate (a mountain with stairs for give on top, there have a church and a viewpoint , also can you find many tipical dishes and crafts)
Bogotá have many huge parks and sport is places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, librarys,
and a bunch of people with open arms,
we are waiting for you,
Welcome to Colombia
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  • tropicallove
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    For tourist I recommend the mall shops, night clubs, sport clubs, and  Monserrate (a mountain with stairs reaching to the top. On top of the mountain there is a church and you can have a bird’s eye view there. You can also find many typical dishes and crafts) .Bogotá has many huge parks and sport places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, libraries, and a bunch of people with open arms. We are waiting for you, Welcome to Colombia

     

    i hope i don't miss anything out .good job!!

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  • Dave
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    Some corrections and suggestions:

    For tourists I recommend the mall shops, nigth night clubs, sport clubs and Monserrate (a mountain with stairs for give on to the mountain top, there have a church and a viewpoint. also can You can find many tipical typical dishes and crafts). Bogotá have has many huge parks and sport is places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, librarys libraries, and a bunch groups of people with open arms. We are waiting for you. Welcome to Colombia.

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  • submarino amari...
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    For tourist, I recomend the mall shops, night clubs, sport clubs. Monserrate (a mountain with stairs to go  on top, there is a church and a viewpoint , also you can find many tipical dishes and crafts) Bogotá has many huge parks and sport is places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, libraries, and a bunch of people with open arms, we are waiting for you. Welcome to Colombia

     

    Good Attempt

    Cheers

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