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When I go to the park I like to ride bike and play with my nephews and nieces. I like football, but I can't practice it, I prefer to watch it on t.v.
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Dave46Mochapoints: 121142 | 教师分: 111912 (100%)When I go to the park I like to ride a bike, and play with my nephews and nieces. I like football, but I can't play it, I prefer to watch it on TV . Very good ! 一年多前提交的 -
ricardoMochapoints: 1546 | 教师分: 526 (84%)Hola Erika, Terrific as usual. Just a few comments for overall clarity. When I go to the park I like to ride my bike and play...I like football, but I can't play it . So I prefer to watch it on TV. (has a more natural sound). As you probably know "practicar" has a slightly different meaning from "practice" i.e. Que' deporte practicas? What sport do you play? Whereas we practice football in order to play better."I can't play it "implies that you don't do it very well (or maybe you are injured). By the way Netherlands vs. Russia is on TV today--Euro 2008. I hope the suggestions are useful. Que tenga un buen fin de semana. Ricardo 一年多前提交的 -
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you done freat keeep practice darling:) 一年多前提交的 -
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