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I go to the park every saturday afternoon with my dog. I do long walks, and often I throw the ball and my dog takes me back. Sometimes I go there with a book, and I read for about two hours.
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... often I throw the ball and my dog takes me back brings it back to me.
Excellent, only one small mistake. Bravo!!!
Excellent - I concur with Mala's comment.
I go to the park every sSaturday afternoon with my dog. I do long walks, and often I throw the ball and my dog takes me back brings it back to me. Sometimes I go there with a book, and I read for about two hours.
:-) Non sei più "beginner"... E' bello sapere che stai bene, ed anche "L" :-)