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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 1

描述你的一天

说明： 运用本课词汇描述你的一天。现在是几点？20分钟前是几点？今天上午你几点起床的？你会在几点睡觉？

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Well ! I ordered at cafe for one vegetarian pastry and a medium size coke.My favourite drink is orange juice and pineapple juice. Yes,as I already explained I have ordered for Pastry
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  • shajosh
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    little bit hungry. You have spoken about today. The question asked is about your routine. You need to write what you order whenever you visit a cafe.
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  • AWARE
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    good use full stop when u end.
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  • Sally Moore
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    Well ! I ordered a vegetarian pastry and a medium Coke at the cafe for one vegetarian pastry and a medium size coke. [Leave a space after the period.] My favourite drink is orange juice and pineapple juice. Yes, as I already explained I have ordered for pastry.

    This is well written, again. I suggested a different word order, but other than that, I can understand what you are saying. Keep up the good work!  \o/
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