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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 4

描述物体、动物和人

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When time I going to grocery shopping, I buy fruits and vegetables.
I buy fruit, such as melons, cucumbers, apples, oranges, bananas, and pineapples. I buy vegetables, such as tomatoes, cabbage, lemons, carrot and so on.
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  • LUCIA
    Mochapoints: 440  |  教师分: 80 (0%)
    Good try when i go to a grocery fro shopping, I buy fruits, such as: melosn, cucumbers,apples,oranges bananas and pineapples. And I buy vegetables such as tomatoes, cabbage, lemons and carrots among others.
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  • Mochapoints: 5994  |  教师分: 5144 (0%)
    This was very good, well done: When I go grocery shopping, I buy fruits and vegtables such as, melons, apples, lemons, oranges bananas and pineapples, cucumbers, tomatoes, cabbage carrots and so on.
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  • anna
    Mochapoints: 1378  |  教师分: 25 (0%)
    This is all fine except the first sentence should be "when i go grocery shopping...." Well done.
    一年多前提交的

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