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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 2

人の特徴を説明する

说明: 描写6个不同的人:一个女人,一个男人,一个男孩,一个女孩,你和我。用上积极和消极的描述性词汇。 xiàwǔ hǎo , wǒde míngzi shì…。wǒ láizì…。 wǒ shì yī míng (xuésheng/lǎoshī ) 。 wǒ ( hǎo/bùzěnme hǎo/hěnhǎo ) 。 zhù nǐ yǒu měihǎo de yītiān

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I am a women .I am tall. I am young.
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  • Lingvo_Amanto-[...
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    Nice effort! :D 'WOMEN' is the PLURAL form of 'WOMAN' You can also write: I'm a woman. I'm tall and young.
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  • Awen
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  • Awen
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    I am a tall, young and pretty woman.
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  • jemmy
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  • jemmy
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    good
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  • Iwan Santos
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    The word ''women'' is on the plural ,so will be ''woman'.
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  • David
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    Good try. There are many ways of saying it.

    I am a tall young woman.

    I am a woman, young and tall.

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  • iran
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    You are woman. You are tall. You are young.and you are very beautifull.

    What your name????

     

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  • Ricardo Rudnick
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    Very Nice my friend. But Women is the plural. The correct is Woman. =)But good job. Bye

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  • Lance
    Mochapoints: 11294  |  教师分: 6215 (100%)

    I am a women woman.(You have used the plural which means more than one lady.Woman-one person, is called the singular)

     I am tall. I am young. This is correct and can be written with many variations.

    I am tall and young.

    I am tall for a young person.

    I am young and tall. 

     

    Many options for you.

     

    Well done and good luck for the remainder of your learning

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  • Bill Barnhill
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    OK, but where are the other 5 people?

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  • andre martinez
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    hola  soñorita de china  quisiera comunicarme con usted  para conocernos y ser buenos amigos  si quiere escriba mi correo y agregueme ... mlboli_335@hotmail.com.  te cuidas  hermosa...  I AM from colombian.  thanks beautifull......

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