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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 3

每周例行事务

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Twin towers petronas is the tallest building that I have been there. It is located in Kuala Lumpur city in Malaysia.
The gas cylinder is the heaviest object that I have lifted. it was 25 Kg.
I never derive any vehicles, because I have not license for driving.
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  • Lucy
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    That's really good, there are only a couple of errors: "The Petronas Twin towers are the tallest buildings that I have been in. They are located in Kuala Lumpur city in Malaysia." - because there are two you might want to use plurals. Also, 'Petronas' would come before 'Twin Towers' (adjective before noun). "I never drive any vehicles, because I am not licensed for driving." or "I never drive any vehicles, because I have not got a license for driving." Good luck.
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  • megpt
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  • megpt
    Mochapoints: 15550  |  教师分: 11886 (100%)
    Twin towers petronas is the tallest building that I have been in. It is located in Kuala Lumpur city in Malaysia. A gas cylinder is the heaviest object that I have lifted. It was 25 Kg. (Use 'A' because we can't see the one you actually lifted) I never drive any vehicles, because I don't have a driving licence.
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  • Ali
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    thanks for your comments.
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  • Maureen
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  • Maureen
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    The Twin Towers in Petronas is the tallest building that I have been to. It is located in Kuala Lumpa city in Malaysia. A gas cylinder is the heaviest object that I have lifted. It was 25kg. I dont drive a vehicle because I do not have a driving licence.
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