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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 5

在公园里

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My last vacation was quite good though my family didn't go to our province. We just had our family outing and Church outing. We went to Tagaytay for 2days and 1day in Batangas. It was fun. I enjoyed it.
I recommend Puerto Galera. Puerto Galera is one of the famous vacation places especially for the foreigners. I haven't been there but I know that it's a great place.
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  • ds
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  • ds
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    Should be: My last vacation was quite good although my family didn't go to our province. We just had our family outing and Church outing. We went to Tagaytay for 2 days and 1 day in Batangas. It was fun. I enjoyed it. I recommend Puerto Galera. Puerto Galera is one of the famous vacation places especially for foreigners. I haven't been there but I know that it's a great place.
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  • Jenny
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    Thanks ds. :)
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