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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 2

出门办事

说明: 写下你要做的一些差事。 你必须去哪里? 什么时间? 跟谁去?

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I work at a Hospital as a lawer and an engeneer.
Tomorrow I'll do some paper work. I don't need to go anywhere tomorrow.
Next week I should go to The Court to Moscow. I'm going to go there by car.
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  • Jet
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    I work at a hospital as a lawyer and an engineer. Tomorrow I'll do some paper work. I don't need to go anywhere tomorrow. Next week I should go to The Court in Moscow. I'm going to go there by car.

    "The Court" - that's correct if it is the title of the court, otherwise, and most likely, it should not have capitals, ie. I should go to the court..

    "I'm going to go there by car" is ok, "I will (or I'll) go there by car" sounds more natural.

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  • Tony
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    Well, Jet said everything that should be said...

    Great work!!!!

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  • Fillmore
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    A couple of small mistakes.  

    hospital; lawyer; engineer.

    There's no need to write 'The' before court.

    'I'm going by car' is adequate in this sentence.

    Well done Natasha.

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