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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 3

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My favorite restaurant is an argentine place where they prepare deliciuos meat. My favorite dish is roast beef. Food is served including salad and potatoes. I also order a glass of red wine to drink. I prefer meat 3/4 cooked. This restaurant is near to down town and it is specially crowded on weekends and holidays, so you have to make a reservation at least 1 day ago.
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  • douglaso
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    very good; only 2 corrections;   it is   downtown, one word;;   and     . . . make a reservation at least 1 day in advance.

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    very good; only 2 corrections;   it is   downtown, one word;;   and     . . . make a reservation at least 1 day in advance.

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    very good; only 2 corrections;   it is   downtown, one word;;   and     . . . make a reservation at least 1 day in advance.

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    very good; only 2 corrections;   it is   downtown, one word;;   and     . . . make a reservation at least 1 day in advance.

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    very good; only 2 corrections;   it is   downtown, one word;;   and     . . . make a reservation at least 1 day in advance.

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    very good; only 2 corrections;   it is   downtown, one word;;   and     . . . make a reservation at least 1 day in advance.

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  • robbiegirl73
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    Hi Pablo!  That's pretty good.  The only changes I see that you need are "Delicious"; not "deliciuos";  also, most people say "well-done, instead of "3/4 cooked" when describing how they like their meat cooked; and the restaurant is "near downtown," not "near to downtown".  It is "especially crowded", not "specially crowded," and lastly, "make your reservation at least 1 day ahead," not "ago".  But good job!

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