出门办事
说明：
写下你要做的一些差事。 你必须去哪里？ 什么时间？ 跟谁去？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 2
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i have to go to school with my friends.Today wearing white shirt and a yellow hat.I like wearing closet happy.
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评论
如何给予好评的小贴士:
具体
- 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
- 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
- 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
- 检查了你的口语练习
- 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。
Hello, Mic:)
Incorrect in general.
Errands means things which u have to do. Ex. I have to go shopping with my brother today. or Im going to dentist tommorrow with my younger sister. .....
Where is she ? At IN the shopping mall. I'm work in hospital. I'm and she IS getting money in the bank. (but better to say We are getting money) They are shopping in the mall.
:))))
Im not sure that I have corrected all mistakes, but, maybe someone native helps u better.
Good luck:)
*I work in a hospital...
*She and I are getting money in the bank...
See you!!!
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