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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 3, 课程 5

多少对象?

说明: 写下许多不同的对象。 哪些人有哪些东西? 不同的人每一种东西有多少个? 例如: 那个女孩有25枝鲜花和7支蜡烛。

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The man has two black cars and one red. The woman has about a one hundred fifty books in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins. The boy has two hundred musical discs. How much apples did you have? I had five apples.
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  • Tory
    Mochapoints: 5403  |  教师分: 2111 (100%)

    'The woman has about  one hundred and fifty books in her bookcase.'

    'How many apples did you have?'

    Excellent! :D

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  • douglaso
    Mochapoints: 16610  |  教师分: 14321 (0%)

    good job;  with minor corrections;  The man has two black cars and one red car.  The woman has about one hundred and fifty book in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins.  The boy has two hundred musical discs. How many apples do you have?  I have five apples.

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  • douglaso
    Mochapoints: 16610  |  教师分: 14321 (0%)

    good job;  with minor corrections;  The man has two black cars and one red car.  The woman has about one hundred and fifty book in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins.  The boy has two hundred musical discs. How many apples do you have?  I have five apples.

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  • douglaso
    Mochapoints: 16610  |  教师分: 14321 (0%)

    good job;  with minor corrections;  The man has two black cars and one red car.  The woman has about one hundred and fifty book in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins.  The boy has two hundred musical discs. How many apples do you have?  I have five apples.

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  • Arvonius
    Mochapoints: 332420  |  教师分: 323072 (100%)

    The man has two black cars and one red car. The woman has about a one hundred and fifty books in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins. The boy has two hundred musical discs. How many apples did you have? I had five apples.

    This is very good work, Serg. Well done!

    How much money have you got? I haven't got many coins left.

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  • Yulita
    Mochapoints: 7981  |  教师分: 5066

    The man has two black cars and A RED ONE. The woman has about a one hundred fifty books in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins. The boy has two hundred musical discs. How MANY apples did you have? I had five apples.

    Not Bad!!!!!!!

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  • Brent Liick
    Mochapoints: 19489  |  教师分: 8620 (100%)

    Very well written Serg! Just two small errors are noticable.

    "The man has two black cars and one red car. The woman has about a one hundred fifty books in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins. The boy has two hundred musical discs. How much many apples did you have? I had five apples."

    Use of many/much:

    The subject is countable and noncountable nouns.

    Countable nouns are those which identify something that can be made plural with the addition of "s". Examples of count nouns are: coin/coins, apple/apples.

    Noncountable nouns are those that designate something which cannot become divisible. Examples of noncount nouns are: happiness, money, and including most abstract nouns such as: duty, honor, etc.

    Countable nouns can be preceded by "many" or "fewer". Noncountable nouns can be preceded by "much" or "less".

    Finally, i would disagree with previous reviews advising the use of "have" in the last sentence. The question asked indicated past tense and therefore, "had" is the correct word.

     

     

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  • Brent Liick
    Mochapoints: 19489  |  教师分: 8620 (100%)

    I have overlooked something in my comments which Tory had already covered. you could say,

    "The woman has about one hundred fifty books ..." or "The woman has a hundred and fifty books..." and either would be correct.

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  • Elena Selivanov...
    Mochapoints: 375  |  教师分: 78 (0%)

    ... 2 black cars and RED ONE.

    ... How MANY apples did you have?

    GOOD ... VERY GOOD

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  • CharlieR
    Mochapoints: 105509  |  教师分: 87903 (100%)

    The man has two black cars and a red one. The woman has about a one hundred fifty books in her bookcase. The girl has fourteen coins. The boy has two hundred musical discs. How much apples did you have? I had five apples.

    In US usage, there's no such thing as a "musical disc". Either use "records" or "compact discs" or "CDs".

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  • CharlieR
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    How many apples did you have?

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