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课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 5
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The stable and strong of the financial system and the banking system as well are the important condition for the developing of the economy.
In 2010, Vietnam will open the market banking services, for this reason, financial organizations will join in Vietnam market and it will have the violent competition.
To viability and development, domestic bank must change technicality, management and human resource... Vietnam banking need to increase the capital scale.
In 2010, Vietnam will open the market banking services, for this reason, financial organizations will join in Vietnam market and it will have the violent competition.
To viability and development, domestic bank must change technicality, management and human resource... Vietnam banking need to increase the capital scale.
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The future strength and stability of the world's financial ecosystem are paramount to the continued development of our economy. Vietnam is scheduled to join the rest of the world's market banking services in 2010... at this time, we will see radically competitive influx of power and interest by (previously) foreign entities.
To become viable in the imminent new financial arena that is being cultivated in Vietnam in the very near future, our local banking instititutions will need to explore change in virtually every facet of their current business strategies.
The stable and strong finacial and banking system are the important conditions are needed for the developing more of the economy.Vietnam will open its market for the banking services and for this reason ,financial organizations will join in the Vietnam market and it will have much competition.Viability,development,and domestic bankings technigues of management and human resources must change.Vietnam banking needs to increase on the capital market scale.
Vietnam joined the WTO some years ago, there are many international banks have visited the VN market. I wrote this message to dibcribe Vn banking market will not be protected by the goverment. Thank you for your Reviews! Cindy
The stable stability and strong strength of the financial system and the banking system as well are the important conditions for the developing of the economy. In 2010, Vietnam will open it's market banking services. For this reason, financial organizations will join the Vietnam market and it will have the violent (violent means angry and upsetting like warfare or natural disasters)(vigorous might be better) competition. To have viability and development, domestic banks must change technicality technically(?)(I'm not sure what you're trying to say) their management and human resources... Vietnam banking needs to increase the capital scale.
Maybe you could say: To have viability and development, domestic banks must improve the technicality of their management and human resources.
I hope this helps.
The stable [stability] and strong [strength] of the financial system and the banking system as well are the important condition[s] for the developing[ment] of the economy. In 2010, Vietnam will open the [its] market [to] banking services[. F]or this reason, financial organizations will join in [enter the] Vietnam market and it will have the violent [there will be fierce] competition. To [For] viability and development, domestic bank[s] must change technicality [technology(?)], management and human resource[s]... Vietnam banking need[s] to increase [on] the capital scale.
Muy bien, pero deberias haber comentado acerca del tiempo, preciosa!!! La tarea no es comentar en elstado financiero y bancario de Vietnam. Oye, porque no aprendes algo de español principiante, para comenzar? Yo estoy dispuesto a ayudarte, si tu lo deseas. Ok? Bye!!!
Princess Phuong, very good! I am very proud of you! I see all the corrections. Keep up the good work!!! Have a nice day!! :D