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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 2, 课程 4

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Today is Tuesday, I am worked. On the evening of today, my general manager, my fellow and I are going to shopping.
My general manager has a white beard and short black hairt. My fellow does not have long red hairt, but she has short glad hairt.
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  • ESLBruce
    Mochapoints: 8290  |  教师分: 4672 (100%)
    You can use one of the verbs, but not both. You could have: Tomorrow is Saturday, but I must work. (A native speaker would probably use "have to" instead of "must") OR Tomorrow is Saturday, but I will be working.
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  • Eliz
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12201  |  教师分: 10323 (100%)
    Hello Demi! Good try! you may write also in this way 'Tomorrow is Saturday, but I have to go to work.' Keep on the good work. Ciao ciao! Eliz
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  • ESLBruce
    Mochapoints: 8290  |  教师分: 4672 (100%)
    Looks like time expressions are being translated from Chinese . Today is Tuesday, I am WORKING. Tonigh, my general manager, my fellow-worker and I are going to shopping. My general manager has a white beard and short black hair. My fellow does not have long red hair, but she has short black(?) hair. I'm not sure what glad hair (notice there is not a "t' on the end of hair) means. I am guessing that you may have meant black hair, unless you meant a glad heart.
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12201  |  教师分: 10323 (100%)
    Good Try Demi! Most of the corrections had been done by your friend. Keep on the good work. Cheers Eliz
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如何给予好评的小贴士:

具体
  • 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
  • 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
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  • 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
  • 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
  • 检查了你的口语练习
  • 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。