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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 8, 课程 2

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My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. The Turkish doner is made from meat. İtis ok.
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  • Ashley
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    This is really good! I just have two suggestions - you might want to combine the second and third sentences - "I like it so much because it is really tasty and good." And the last sentence should be "It is ok." But that might have just been a typo, if so just ignore this comment.
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  • Saifu
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    Beautiful
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  • Saifu
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    Beautiful
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  • Jenny
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    good. ;p
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  • jj
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    1. My favourite meal is a Turkish Doner. Perfect! In USA English, favourite = favorite. You use the British spelling of the word. 2. I like it so much. Because it is really tasty and good. = I like it so much because it is really tasty and good. (Because is a conjunction, or a word that connects thoughts and sentences.) Thank you for writing about this. It sounds very good. I had not heard the word "Doner" before. We grill meat on spits, especially in the summer, in the United States.
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  • Shirkutza
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  • Kathy0215
    Mochapoints: 1363  |  教师分: 1211 (0%)
    My favorite meal is a turkish doner. I liek it so much because it is really tasty and good. The turkish doner is made from meat , it is ok.
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  • 一切随缘
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    very good
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  • Kanyanush
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    good !!~
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