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My last vacation was 2006. I was in Florida. My girlfriend lives in Florida and she had invited me to visit them. We were in Miami, Palm Beach and we visited a concert.
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具体
- 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
- 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
- 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
- 检查了你的口语练习
- 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。
My last vacation was on 2006. I was in Florida. My girlfriend lives in Florida and she had invited me to visit them. We were in Miami, Palm Beach and we visited a concert.
GOOD job! .....................we went to a concert.
My last vacation was in 2006. I went to Florida. My girlfriend lives in Florida and she had invited me to visit them.( who is them?) While we were in Miami, Palm Beach, we went to a concert.