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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 2, 课程 1

描述物体

说明: 描述桌子上的一组物体。 描述盒子里的一组物体。例如:一束鲜花放在桌子上,糖果放在盒子里。

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Yesterday, I had a happy holiday with my friend and my family.
In the morning, i got up at 6 o'clock and then had a breakfast with my family. 8 o'clock, I went out and visited my friend's house. I helped her with her house work and then she go with me to by a present for my friend's birthday. Then we have lunch together . In the afternoon, I went to my friend's birthday party and had a very happy party. The party finished at 6 o'clock and I went home to have dinner with my families .
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具体
  • 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
  • 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job(干得好)” 或者 “Needs work(仍需努力)"这样的短评。
更正
  • 使用编辑功能提供的删除线,粗体或不同颜色的字体。
  • 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
  • 检查了你的口语练习
  • 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。