描述家用物品
说明：
描述一栋房子内三个房间里的物品。例如：小垫子铺在门厅。 镜子挂在壁橱外面。 厨房水槽在厨房里。
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 101, 单元 3, 课程 2
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The study table is in my bedroom where I use it every night for study my important papers,there is also a cassete player to sooth my soul.
There is a television in our drawing room where we use it to entertain our guests,there is also a shelf full of magazine on different topics.
We have a small washing machine in our laundry.
The kitchen has a supply of luke warm water for different usage,and also a cabinet to place cuttlery and different utencils.
The geaser has been installed at a safe place to avoid any mishap.
There is a television in our drawing room where we use it to entertain our guests,there is also a shelf full of magazine on different topics.
We have a small washing machine in our laundry.
The kitchen has a supply of luke warm water for different usage,and also a cabinet to place cuttlery and different utencils.
The geaser has been installed at a safe place to avoid any mishap.
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评论
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具体
- 提出有用的建议和举例说明。
- 写下更多的评价而不仅仅是“Good job（干得好）” 或者 “Needs work（仍需努力）"这样的短评。
更正
- 使用编辑功能提供的删除线，粗体或不同颜色的字体。
- 在你的评论中借助虚拟键盘来输入特殊字母。
举例讲解/说明
- 检查了你的口语练习
- 注意正确的发音和说话的方式。
It is nice piece of work. Just one thing; You should have given space after commas.
Corrected sentence:
The desk is in my bedroom where I use it every night to study my important papers. There is also a cassette player to soothe my soul. There is a television in our drawing room to entertain our guests. There is also a shelf full of magazines on different topics. We have a small washing machine in our laundry room. The kitchen has a supply of luke warm water for different uses, and a cabinet to place cutlery and different utensils. The greaser has been installed in a safe place to avoid any mishaps.
Desk - is another word for study table.
Greaser - deep fryer or another word for stove/oven. The word you used is slang in America for "old person." Example: "That old geaser almost hit me with his car!"
The rest of the bolded words are just corrections in spelling or singular/plural words.
I hope this helped! Great job! :)
good. they gave you detail comment.
Hello Qaiser! Beside the details Veganshannon mentioned I consider this is a good exercise, within LM requirements!
Good luck friend, Nancy Aida
Hello Qaiser. You have made a very good effort with this exercise.
I am puzzled about "geeser" = "geyser" (domestic hot water heater) perhaps? I am not trying to detract from Veganshannon's superb job of correction and explanation.
Veganshannon gave good advice.
(Lukewarm should be one word.)
Stan
Hi your job is very good but you have some mistakes in your dictation.......magazines....cutlery.....utensils.....greaser...mishaps.
Except some spelling mistake.your paragraph is good sir.
The study desk is in my bedroom where I use it every night for study my important papers. There is also a cassette player to soothe my soul. There is a television in our drawing room where we use it to entertain our guests. There is also a shelf full of magazines on different topics. We have a small washing machine in our laundry room. The kitchen has a supply of( luke- I did not understand this word) warm water for different uses,and a cabinet to place cutlery and different utensils. The geyser has been installed at a safe place to avoid any mishap.
Very good job,
Good work and very comprehensively commented by members. Well done and go on.