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I am from Sevastopol, Ukraine.. If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to visit this site http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sevastopol and
http://foto.sevastopol.info/eindex.html
Sevastopol is on the coast of peninsula Crimea .
There are many landmarks and parks there.
I recommend to visit Balaclava Bay, where is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was Greek city in 529/528 BC. Swallow’s Nest is one of landmarks also. It is a monument of architecture and located on the rock above the Black See.
http://foto.sevastopol.info/eindex.html
Sevastopol is on the coast of peninsula Crimea .
There are many landmarks and parks there.
I recommend to visit Balaclava Bay, where is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was Greek city in 529/528 BC. Swallow’s Nest is one of landmarks also. It is a monument of architecture and located on the rock above the Black See.
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........Sevastopol is on the coast of the Crimean peninsula. There are many landmarks and parks there. I recommend a visit to Balaclava Bay, where there is a very nice view, and Chersonesus, which was a Greek city between 528 and 529 B.C. Swallow's Nest is also one of an interesting landmark. It is a monument of architecture and is located on a rock above the Black Sea.
If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to visit [visiting] this site
Svita,
As always, wonderful work. Watch the spelling and articles.
1. ... I recommend that you visit this site...
2. ... on the coast of the Crimean peninsula.
3. ... I recommend that you visit Balaclava Bay, where there is a very nice view.... OR... , which has a very nice view
4. The Swallow's Nest is...
5. It is an architectural monument... Black Sea.
Ed
I am from Sevastopol, Ukraine.. If you are going to Sevastopol, I recommend to you visit this site...
Sevastopol is on the coast of the Crimean peninsula.
I recommend to you visit Balaclava Bay, where there is very nice view and Chersoneses, which was a Greek city in 529/528 BC.
Swallow’s Nest is one of the landmarks also.]
It is a monument of architecture and located on the a rock above the Black See.