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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 5, 课程 3

每周例行事务

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I always go to school by bike.
I rarely wear makeup.
I sometimes eat burger for lunch.
My father often smoke in frint of the computer.
My mom usually wash my clothes.
And i almost never get up early^^
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  • NaughtyDeXter
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    U just made a spelling mistake...may be typing error....rest is good..tc

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  • Arvonius
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    I always go to school by bike. I rarely wear make-up. I sometimes eat a burger for lunch. My father often smokes in front of the computer. My mom usually washes my clothes, and I almost never get up early.

    Hello Hanxwlove. Some corrections made to help your learning. Please use "I" and not "i" when writing about yourself. 

    Don't start a sentence with "And, but, so, because," and other "joining words". It is bad grammar.

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  • Jenny 제니 珍妮 ジ...
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    I always go to school on my bike. I rarely wear makeup. I sometimes eat burger for lunch. My father often smoke in front of the computer. My mom usually wash my clothes. I almost never get up early^^

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