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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 102, 单元 4, 课程 1
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I have a vacation on weekends. . It is a day of camping, I never forget it . The camper for my family .We start go from the morning, we sit on the vehicle sixteen seats. Landscape on the road is very beautiful. But it inspired me to remember about rice fields large in Vietnam . We arrive and prepare pitch . I am busy with work search wood , while the rest everyone, are preparing . We work come Nightfall . This is the moments of the camps for us. We burned the fire, sitting and singing together eat the dishes have prepared . It dark again , We cleaning everything and into the pitch to sleep . The morning after , we mops up baggage up car and prepare back home .
Camping session ends
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Camping session ends
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Hola Phan Nhan. Yo le puedo ayudar con los ejercicios de español. Aunque considero que este es un buen ejercicio de inglés. bye.
I had a vacation on the weekend. It was a day of camping. I'll never forget it. (......?) We started in the morning. We drove in a vehicle that had sixteen seats. The scenery along the way was very beautiful and it reminded me of the large rice fields in Vietnmam.
We arrived and prepared to pitch out tent. I was busy searching for wood as everyone else was preparing the camp. We worked until nightfall. This is the best moment of camping for us, sitting and singing around the fire and eating the dishes we have prepared. When it was dark we cleaned up everything and went into our tent to sleep. The morning after we packed up our bagage into the car and prepared to go back home. That was the end of our camping session.
A good try Nhan. Try to remember to use the past tense of the verbs - It was a day/ We started/ was very beautiful/ vv