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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 1

介绍自己

说明： 介绍你自己。告诉我们你的名字，你好吗，你来自哪里，在哪里住，在哪里工作，等等。 jièshào nǐzìjǐ 。 gàosu wǒmen nǐ de míngzi ， nǐhǎo mǎ ， nǐ láizì nǎli ， zài nǎli zhù ， zài nǎli gōngzuò ， děngděng 。

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I hava a good friend. her name is shuangyu.she is thin,she is not fat.she is not very rich.she is not pool.she is young.she is not old.
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  • shuangyu
    Mochapoints: 635  |  教师分: 122 (0%)
    I have a good friend. Her name is Shuangyu. She is a pretty girl. She is not very rich .
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  • matusa
    Mochapoints: 3642  |  教师分: 225 (100%)
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  • matusa
    Mochapoints: 3642  |  教师分: 225 (100%)
    It ´s better than your speaking. Mistakes *Her* na me is ... she is a *pretty* and *jimp*
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  • Yukkidesu
    Mochapoints: 1000  |  教师分: 45 (0%)
    you did pretty good Shuangyu wrote the right way but i would still be able to understand what your trying to say lol i don't know what jimpness is XD
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  • Yukkidesu
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  • me
    Mochapoints: 313  |  教师分: 70 (0%)
    I have a good friend. Her name is Shuangyu. She is young and thin. She is not very rich.
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  教师分: 103536
    I have a good friend. Her name is Shuangyu. She is thin, she is not fat. She is not very rich. She is not poor. She is young. She is not old. This was good practice!
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