英语书写练习 (所有级别)

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  mrlum_2001
  

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  Beezhan
  

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  Very nice. It is completely understandable. I have put a few {corrections} in to help it sound more natural. I hope it helps! Have a good day, Beezhan I live in Hefei, China. There are all kinds of restaurants here. And there're {use "there are" - "there're" is not an abbreviation we use} lots of specials in each reataurant. Especially Sichuan food are here and there{"Sichuan food is especially good here" - the extra "and there" is not needed}. My favorite dish is SUANCAI FISH there {you don't need to use the extra "there"} (I'm sorry that iI can't type the name of this dish in English) It's really delicious.... {your English is excellent - I think I could order it if I were to visit Hefei} I like tomato and egg soup best. And I also love rice, {remember to put spaces after yoru commas ", "} dumlings,and so on. Welcome to Hefei. I'll show you the great specials in many reataurants here. Very good! 一年多前提交的

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  shuangyu
  

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  Thank you very much. I'll try my best to learn English well. 一年多前提交的

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  Henrique _ 恩裏克
  

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  Good Job ^^ and, i prayed for Sichuan... Sour Vegetable Fish Soup (Suancai Yu, 酸菜鱼) ^^ zaijian 一年多前提交的

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  shuangyu
  

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  Thanks a lot. hehe 一年多前提交的

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