形容你所在城市的某个地区
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运用本课词汇描述你所在城市最繁忙的一条街道。这条街道有些什么风格的建筑物？它们分别座落在什么位置？
英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 201, 单元 8, 课程 4
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Because of my profile picture, sometimes people misunderstand that I'm younger than my real age
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.
Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.
Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
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::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | 教师分: 2261 (0%)一年多前提交的拼字: -
::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | 教师分: 2261 (0%)
well done, Richard.. Your english is very good 一年多前提交的 -
::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | 教师分: 2261 (0%)
well done, Richard.. Your english is very good 一年多前提交的 -
::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | 教师分: 2261 (0%)
well done, Richard.. Your english is very good 一年多前提交的 -
Carlim BarrosoMochapoints: 371 | 教师分: 15 (0%)一年多前提交的拼字: -
Carlim BarrosoMochapoints: 371 | 教师分: 15 (0%)
very good !!! 一年多前提交的 -
Loren BergesonMochapoints: 4387 | 教师分: 2459 (100%)一年多前提交的拼字: -
Loren BergesonMochapoints: 4387 | 教师分: 2459 (100%)
The first few sentences were perfect, so I don't repeat them. Suggested corrections follow. I'm not sure what you mean by "I can count even the number of my beard now" My hair isn't parted but is styled like that of little boys. Futhermore, I wear red colored casual shirts. As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count the number of hairs in my beard. It's a kind of genetic thing. To tell the truth, I am pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen as old as my age is better especially in my business. 一年多前提交的 -
Loren BergesonMochapoints: 4387 | 教师分: 2459 (100%)
I'm sorry, in my previous post I said you needed to replace "inborn" with "genetic". I checked my dictionary, and "inborn" is indeed correct: "It's a kind of inborn thing". I should be more careful and check my dictionary more often. 一年多前提交的
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