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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 1

描述你的一天

说明： 运用本课词汇描述你的一天。现在是几点？20分钟前是几点？今天上午你几点起床的？你会在几点睡觉？

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I went to breakfast in a cafe near my house, I was hungry and hurry. I ordered toats, some cheese and eggs. To drink I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink.
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  • STJAMES
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    I went to breakfast in a cafe near my house, I was hungry and (in a) hurry. I ordered toats, some cheese and eggs. To drink (*see below) I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink.

    "To drink I ordered" is OK English, but to my ear sounds a bit funny.  No big deal , but in colloquial language I would tend to say, "For a drink I ordered", or even "as a drink I ordered"
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  • carl
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    very good, one spelling error:

    I went to for breakfast in a cafe near my house, I was hungry and in a hurry. I ordered toasts, some cheese and eggs. To drink I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink.
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  • GIM
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    I went to breakfast at a cafe near my house. Write the preposition at in the prepositional phrase at a cafe.  I was hungry and in a hurry. I ordered a slice of toast, some cheese and eggs. To drink I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink. You do not have to write to drink in your sentence because that is stating the obvious. You are a wonderful writer, Mariana.
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