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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 5

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It is snowing today, but isn't very cold (about 5 celcius). In this part of planet very often snowing. It is supposed tomorrow will be such weather as today.
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  • Katja
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    Today it is snowing , but right now not very cold (about - 5 degrees celsius ). In this part of planet it's very often snowing. I suppose that tomorrow weather will be the same as today's.
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  • Ron English
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    Paul, Here is how it should be written: It is snowing today and isn't very cold. It's about 5 celcius. In this part of the world it snows often. It is supposed to be the same weather tomorrow as today.
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  • allegro24dreame...
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    Paul, That was a nicely written submission :) You should also try doing some of the audio to continue practicing...
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  • likuna66
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    bien :)
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