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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 3, 课程 4

何时何地?

说明: 描述六个人何时要去哪里: 一个女人、一个男人、一个女孩、一个男孩、你和我。例如:那个男人八点钟要去餐馆吃饭。

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The woman is going to the bank at eight o´clock.
The man is going to the office at quarter past seven.
The boys are going to the school at quarter to nine.
The girls are going are coming at four thirty.
You are buying tomatoes in the supermarket at quarter to ten.
I am sleeping in my bedroom all day and i wake up at four o´clock.

My cousin is playing soccer in the yard and my mother is cooking in the kitchen at eleven o´clock. I have one sister and two stepsisters Ghislaine is my sister but she is in Panama Adela and Andrea are my stepsisters. Adela helps my mom in the kitchen and Andrea is the most young of the family, and she watching T.V all day, and i am very sad because my holidays are ended
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  • LMLSCA
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    Andrea is the youngest of the family.

    Watch your punctuation, I didn't correct it, but usuing periods and commas will make your submission easier to read.

    It was nice to get to know you better! Excellent writing, as usual.

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