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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 101, 单元 1, 课程 3

描述物体

说明： 分别用肯定句和否定句描述六种物体（汽车，花朵，硬币，树，房子，钱包）。例如：这房子是黑色的。它不是白色的。

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i have a house,it is new,it's yellow.the before door is green,it isn't yard.it have many folewers before the house.
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  • KZ
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  • KZ
    Mochapoints: 2381  |  教师分: 1620
    Instead of saying "it is new, it's yellow", you can combine them e.g. "it is new and yellow". "Before door" should be "front door". "It isn't yard" - better to say "it doesn't have a yard.
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  • ker
    Mochapoints: 19  |  教师分: 15 (0%)
    how about this: I have a new house which is painted in yellow and the front door is green. It doesn't have a yard but has many flowers infront of the house. We mostly use the word before when we refer to dates... ^_~ Good luck... I always say practice makes perfect!
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  • ResidentX
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    I have a new yellow house with a green door with many flowers in front of it.
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  • ResidentX
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    I have a new yellow house with a green front door and many flowers in the front yard.
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  • x3m
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    "I have a house. My house is new and yellow. The front door is green. There is no yard. I have many flowers planted in front of the house."
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  • Don.......傅堂诺
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  • Don.......傅堂诺
    Mochapoints: 9827  |  教师分: 5207 (0%)
    Hello Faith. Let me start out by saying this submission refers to the past. All these comments that you are getting are referring to the present. So I will write how it should be in "past tense". My house was new. It was yellow and the door was green. It did not have a yard, but it had many flowers in front of the house. If you need more help with the "tenses" (past, present, and future) please contact me :-)))) Keep up the hard work.
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  • SONGJI
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    this sounds a little better if you say. I have a yellow house with a green door,in the front of the house there are many flowers.
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