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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 101, 单元 2, 课程 3
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I am studing inglish in my house.I am wearing red a t-shirt, blue a skirt and white a shocks.
I am not wearing a coat because here it is not cold. o here do not cold?
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frankieMochapoints: 3889 | 教师分: 711 (0%)一年多前提交的拼字: -
frankieMochapoints: 3889 | 教师分: 711 (0%)
Muy Bien, sòlo algunas correcciones. I am STUDYING (study+ing) english in my house. I am wearing a red t-shirt, blue skirt and white socks. I am not wearing a coat because here it is not cold. Very good. Hasta luego. 一年多前提交的 -
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CarlMochapoints: 936 | 教师分: 115 (0%)
I have made some corrections: I am studying English in my house. I am wearing a red t-shirt, a blue skirt and white socks. I am not wearing a coat because it is not cold here. English is spelt with an E, and always has a capital letter. Excellent work : ) 一年多前提交的 -
James KimMochapoints: 1410 | 教师分: 13 (0%)My country have four seasons. And we need many kinds of clothes. So I must spend much money to buy clothes. 一年多前提交的 -
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silent_orchestr...Mochapoints: 343 | 教师分: 115 (0%)
There are some mistakes need to be taken care of at the beginner level.your first sentence should be"I am studying English in my home.I am wearing a red T-shirt,a blue skirt and a pair of socks."I don't understand what u want to say in the sentence"o here do not cold?" Don't get disheartened by whatever I wrote but I think you need to work on these points. Thanks 一年多前提交的
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