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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 7, 课程 1

我的购物车

说明： 运用词汇描述购物车或购物篮里的常见食物，并准确形容每种食物的数量或份量，比如：两盒牛奶，一些蔬菜，一打鸡蛋。

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I went to the concert of 'epikhigh'.
It was fantastic~! =]
umm... the concert wasn't far from my home. :)
It's $50
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  • Quetzalcoatl II
    Mochapoints: 71983  |  教师分: 68160 (100%)
    Very good, Hana. I went to the concert of "Epikhigh", lastnight. (yesterday, last month, etc). The concert was fantastic, and it wasn't far from my home. The entrance (ticket, cover) costed me $50. Keep up with the good work. Good luck.
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  • Quetzalcoatl II
    Mochapoints: 71983  |  教师分: 68160 (100%)
    I'm sorry, Hana, but I made a mistake. The verb "cost" it's the same in simple past and present tense. The ticket costs me .....(present tense) The ticket cost me .......(simple past) Bye.
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  • 何那♥
    Mochapoints: 1220  |  教师分: 211 (0%)
    < rectify > I went to the concert of "Epikhigh", last month. The concert was fantastic, and it wasn't far from my home. The ticket cost me $50. p.S ) really, thx ~! =D
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