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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 3

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The popular holiday is the Spring Festival in china. The Spring Festival is the first day in a year in lunar calendar. we have 7 days to rest . The New Year eve is the last day in a year and all people in china will try their best to stay with their family in the day. The day's supper is the richest in a year even if the beggar's. people get up early in the Spring Festival morning that represent a new life starting.
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  • SteveB
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    Good work. Here are a few corrections: A popular holiday in China is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is the first day of the year in the lunar calendar. We have 7 days to rest . (The New Year eve is the last day in a year-not clear) The people of china will try their best to be with their family for the day. The day's supper is the richest of the year, even in a beggar's home. People get up early for the Spring Festival morning that represents the start of a new life.
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  • edward
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    piao liang bu cuo. Spring Festival , the first day in the lunar year, is a popular holiday in China. Most people will try to spend time with their family and have a big feast on new years eve, and rest for the next week national holiday. Even beggars have some enjoyment as they get up early on this day which represents the hope of starting a new life. jia you jia you
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  • Don Moore
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    A popular holiday is the Spring Festival in China. The Spring Festival is the first day of the year in the lunar calendar. We have 7 days to rest . The New Year's eve is the last day in the year and all the people in China will try their best to stay with their family in the day. The day's supper is the richest in a year even if the beggar's. People get up early in the Spring Festival morning that represents a new life starting.
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  • kromm
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    Very well written description of the Spring Festival. The small corrections by SteveB are excellent. Good Job, your English is easy to understand.
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  • E.M.H
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    Well done .. keep the good work
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  • Henrique _ 恩裏克
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    Good :)
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