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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 7, 课程 1

我的购物车

说明： 运用词汇描述购物车或购物篮里的常见食物，并准确形容每种食物的数量或份量，比如：两盒牛奶，一些蔬菜，一打鸡蛋。

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oh .so good is a subject! but i want to say this vacation
because i'm no't go to home in this vacation
now i'm staying here of other province. they are a beautiful city
this city is Haikou city of Hainan province in china. my hometown is at Xi'an city of Shanxi province in china. they space is too far .how about 3000 kilometres . i cost 2000 RMB in this vacation.

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  • Jasmine
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  • Jasmine
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    It is good. But you should write This is a beautiful citynaed Haikueof Haimen province in China. Avoid using they at many places. overall satisfactory.....
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  • Hansibai
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    English grammar is so hard, good try. I can understand your main ideas. Some patterns you may want to spend more time on involve (a vs. this, it vs. they, located in vs. is at). Approximately is a good word for your vocabulary instead of 'how about'. Good effort.
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  • wordman
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    Hi, Sky. I hope this helps a little. Oh, such a good subject! But I want to talk about this vacation, because I’m not going home. I’m staying here in another province. This is the beautiful city, Haikou of Hainan Province in China. My hometown is Xi’an of Shanxi province in China. These cities are very far apart, about 3000 kilometers. This vacation costs me 2000 RMB.
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