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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 9, 课程 3

活动：今天和昨天

说明： 运用本课词汇、现在进行时和简单过去时描述六种人（男人和女人，男孩和女孩，你和我）的活动。譬如：有个男人正在湖里游泳。昨天有个男人在湖里游泳。

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My favourite restaurant is a very little place,but it's foods are delicious.
It is a fast-food restaurant.There are lots of sandwich alternatives.My favourite sandwich is shwarma.It is a sandwich that includes meat with yoghurt and lettuce in it.
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  • nerminfgr
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    good.
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  • KathleenVeronic...
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    Well done Sara. It would be better to say the restaurant is a very small place since we do not normally say very little but just little. another small mistake is you do not use an apostophe in ITS. Excellent. Kahleen
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  • Jonas Sousa
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    corrections: better to say "very small place"; " but its foods" ("its"without apastrophe, because it's genitive case- "of the restaurant"); yogurt. very good my friend...:) see you
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  • Jeff
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    Very good, my only advice would be to double space between sentences.
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  • abbhi
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    very good.
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  • Hendy
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    Be sure to keep space between your period and the next word. Besides some small spelling errors you seem to be doing very well.
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  • Madeha
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    Very good,
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