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英语书写练习 (所有级别)
课程 102, 单元 4, 课程 1
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I'm living 12 km far from the city, in which is my high school situated. Because of this fact I have to use a public transportation to get on time to school. I don't know as in your countries, but in our none bus has never arrived on bus-stop on time. It's definitely a true, cause I'm using my rich experiences, which I have obtained after eight years of travelling. After seeing and realizing that 50 percent of buses, which are currently being used, are so old that you wonder how it is possible that they can still be moving. But somehow or other it is the only way how I can get to school. However I already have a driving licence, we have only one car, which is usually being used by my father. In spite of all these facts, there is still one option. In the summer when it is already enough warm in the morning, I used to go to school by bike. You know, it is a time when you don't have to learn any more. I am using an old route behind that main, only for safety. It is a good way how to keep fit and fresh so early.
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very well done than the previous one, you have made mistake in only one sentences that is i have to use public transportation to get on time to school you have to change only one word that is get you can change it as go now it will give you correct meaning very good you have only less mitake well done keep it up & all the best....