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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 201, 单元 8, 课程 1

描述你所在的城市和国家的地理位置

说明： 运用本课词汇描述你所在的城市和国家的地理位置。你国家的东、西、南、北面分别都是哪些国家？你居住的城市位于国家的哪个位置？描述你所在城市的东、西、南、北面都有哪些城市。

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My name is Shelleytu, of course, shelley is not my Chinese name, but i think every english learner should get a english name. Then you know, i come from China,a country that has a long and colorful history and is developing very fast. I am learning english, not just because that we have english exams, actually i love learning foreign languages and i love english very much.I'm trying my best to make as many foreign friends as possible to improve my english.
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  • Don Moore
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    Shelley, this is very well done. You must capitalize the personal pronoun "I" and you should add a space after a comma and two after a period. See!! Very few changes. Oh and you should capitalize words such as English.
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  • kromm
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    Terrific exercise in English, just the minor changes by Don Moore. Very good expression in your story.
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    Learn from what Don Moore has highlighted. Well Done!!
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  • Parker
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    My name is Shelleytu. Of course, shelley is not my Chinese name, but I think every English learner should get a English name. *As* you know, I come from China; a country that has a long and colorful history and is developing very fast. I am learning English, not just because that we have English exams,*but* I actually love learning foreign languages and I love English very much. I'm trying my best to make as many foreign friends as possible to improve my English. Great work! Only punctiation...You write very interesting exercises.
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  • edward
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    I am from China and my English name is Shelleytu. I think that every Chinese student learning English should have an English name. I am learning English because I love studying foreign languages, and not just because of the pending English exams. I also hope to make many foreign friends and improve in that way. China is developing very fast, and has a long and colorful history and I am proud to be Chinese. Well this is just another way of saying same thing. You already have great reviews. Keep it up. you are doing so well with such a good presentation. jia you jia you
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