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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 202, 单元 10, 课程 1

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HI, YOU CAN GO TO MANY DIFFERENT MUSEUMS THAT WE HAVE IN OUR CITY. FIRST AT ALL, YOU CAN GO TO THE DOWNTOWN, AND GET A TROLEBUS, IT TAKES YOU TO SEE ALL OF THEM, LIKE THE "CASA DE BENITO JUAREZ", "CASA DE LA CULTURA", "QUINTA GAMEROS", "MUSEO DEL MAMUT", "CASA DE PANCHO VILLA", ETC. AT NIGHT, YOU CAN GO TO THE MANDALA RESTAURANT, OUTDOORS, YOU CAN SEE MOST OF THE CITY, EAT AND DRINK AND IF YOU HAVE COLD, YOU CAN ASK FOR A ZARAPE. AFTER A GOOD DINNER, YOU CAN GO TO DANCE, LISTEN MUSIC, DRINK OR SEE MANY PEOPLE IN MANY CAVERNS WITH DIFFERENT MUSIC, WHAT EVER YOU WANT.
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  • yustinian
    Mochapoints: 851  |  教师分: 111 (0%)
    Is quite good, I only have some remarks, as follows: museums that exists (if I were you I woldn`t use `we have`); - you can go downtown not to the downtown; trolley bus; -whatever not what ever. Enjoy it.
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