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英语书写练习 (所有级别)

课程 102, 单元 4, 课程 2

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Fortunately I regurarly go to work every week from Monday to Friday. I believe in the work, in the way that it could help us to understand something about ourselves and about the life. So in the work you can experience the rules driving the life. You can feel envy and happiness, jealousy and devotion, hate and love, lies and truth. All of those mixed in a different ways each moment and each day. In the weekend I try to enjoy my life and do what I feel right, always considering the other men as my brothers.
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  • adrk
    Mochapoints: 360  |  教师分: 25 (0%)
    a different ways in the work All of those mixed the above three sentences are wrong try to discover your fault yourself.
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  • adrk
    Mochapoints: 360  |  教师分: 25 (0%)
    try to make short sentences at that level of learning to avoid mistakes. Do not use conjunctions now as you will fell in mistakes.Also,try to read some little books in English to give you strong expressions. good luck.
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  • Edwin
    Mochapoints: 4594  |  教师分: 1635 (0%)
    ok. in englih I nderstand and is ok
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  • Marie
    Mochapoints: 6193  |  教师分: 513 (0%)
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